pftq's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[:Stormy Skies:]

Very nice - it even forms a perfect loop.
Can't wait to hear the finished work. :)

AshleyAlyse responds:

I will PM you if I make it into a full song! :D Thank you!

[Tracking a Killer]

Thanks for sharing. Always enjoy your work - great stuff.

Bosa responds:

Thank you, man. I appreciate your review.

[Into the Sun]

Went through a bunch of your works - they're pretty good. I don't know why some of them are rated so low.

Liked the variation in the song. Some of the transitions seemed a bit rough - maybe have some of the melodies continue or hold their notes a little longer. The other thing would just be the samples sounding a little dry but that's not something you can do too much about.

[Atheist VS Creationist]

Like the melody a lot - it's very intricate and complex - but the sound quality holds it back.
Could use more supporting instruments in the background to build the atmosphere.

[The red sunset]

Nice but...

Try to mix up the loops a bit more. It was a bit too easy to tell this was made from existing samples in Garageband because there were a number of other songs using the same ones.
Example: newgrounds.com/audio/listen/116846

[Eden (Piano)]

Awkward Start

Agree a bit with the off-tune comments below, but they're not that bad. You *could* say they were intentional depending on what you were going for with the song (if you were going for a haunting kind of feel). They're mainly in the intro and then the replay at the end.

One thing that bothers me is the staggered feel of the notes. Sometimes it seems like the left hand is just playing the same note repeatedly for a while and the pace never really changes, but again, that really depends on what you were going for.

[Great Memories]

Wish it was a bit longer...

Very nice background music. I thought I heard the theme somewhere before, but I'm not sure.

While it's very loopable, I do wish it was a bit longer and more elaborate.

[Reasoner- Living Transparent]

Perfect as is...

I listened to a few variations on this song that tried to incorporate other instruments, but I think the song is just much better being a piano solo the way it is already.

[Arlulu]

Great Song...

Great song... could barely tell it was improvised on the spot, but can tell the chords were definitely strongest here.