Couldn't tell it was a horrible computer so no worries there.
Nothing wrong with the piece but it could've used some more contrast, kind of like what you brought in towards the end. The transition at 30-sec, for example, seemed like a good place change things up a little but then it just continued on.
Overall a good song though - liked the buildup at the beginning especially.
You know, at 0:28 I had a different part which kind of sounded like the end. I didn't think it sounded too good, but maybe that's just my thinking. I might put it back in. :) Thank you so much for your review! :D
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Rated 5 / 5 stars 12 days ago
Really liked the instrumentation and amount of detail put into this one, as NorskeDrittsekk mentioned. Good job
Thanks, I'm glad people noticed the detail, it takes extra time but I think it's worth it!
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars 12 days ago
Couldn't tell it was a horrible computer so no worries there.
Nothing wrong with the piece but it could've used some more contrast, kind of like what you brought in towards the end. The transition at 30-sec, for example, seemed like a good place change things up a little but then it just continued on.
Overall a good song though - liked the buildup at the beginning especially.
You know, at 0:28 I had a different part which kind of sounded like the end. I didn't think it sounded too good, but maybe that's just my thinking. I might put it back in. :) Thank you so much for your review! :D
Rated 5 / 5 stars 12 days ago
Very nice - it even forms a perfect loop.
Can't wait to hear the finished work. :)